I uploaded my advert to my class teams channel, Facebook and WhatsApp to receive feedback on my advert and how I can improve upon it.
The feedback I received from Facebook was to add some more colours to make it stand out more.
I also received some feedback on my teams channel, for example, adding different effects such as shadows, someone suggested adding a shadow to my logo. Overall, the feedback suggested more creative effects and colour but the use of black and white was effective.
The feedback I received from my WhatsApp group suggested that I needed to add something to emphasise what my slogan 'head above' means and why I have used it in my advert. They did say they really liked the image used and the colours.
I agree with most of the feedback, I took the feedback from teams and added some shadowing to the logo and image. I also moved the text around to emphasise it more.
I also changed my slogan based on the feedback. I changed this to 'Urban look from head to foot' to emphasise the clothing wear and target audience.
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